____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This is for *Lettelira 's mini contest I saw the journal 3 days ago and I thought i should participate But the deadline was the ninth. Phew!~ 17 hours of hard work!! I love the details of the Ocs xD I made a few changes though.. ;D Done in paint tool sai I hope you guys like it!! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Unless you credit me I will improve on my cuteness desu...
Your work is great, creative, original, and very cute. I'm very impressed by your work and i envy you . Your one of the inspiring artist that always helps me improve to great too. All i have to say is that you need to work on the anatomy of her hips and legs. Everything else is fine, i really like what you did with the eyes there so enchanting *A*. Though my wok isn't as great as yours i hope this helps . be proud of your art no matter how terrible you might think it is remember that always okay ^-^
Okay, that's good work, and I'm no great artist myself (check out my work), but those eyes are so god. if you could make the rest in fit with those beautiful eyes there. it'd look like a million bucks. I say work on the body some and you'll have a piece to really brag about :3 haha. But seriously, the only thing that's really not fit for this is the way the woman's legs are. I had the same kind of trouble with one of mine > [link] (I mean look, her hips are way to small) < but what i really mean, is that if you keep working at all this, you could become something big and do great things with your art (eg. Manga writing or comic development etc.) I used to be shit, like everyone was to start with, but look at my now. I'm making album covers and posters for a fucking band! and I'm only 17! haha (if you want to look > [link] and [link] < but yeah to be fair. your a great artist, and people like you make me happy to be an artist This work is an inspiration to those less fortunate with artistic skill :3
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